Rahmat ki Barsaat by Saghar

by **Bhaimiya** » Sat Aug 03, 2002 9:31 pm

Jab to peyda huwa kitna majboor tha, Yeh jahan teri sochon sey bhi door tha, Haat paoon bhi tab terey apney na they, Teri aankhon mein duniya key sapney na they, Tuj ko aata tha jo sirf rona hi tha, Doodh pi key tera kaam sona hi tha, Tuj ko chalna sikaya tha maan ney teeri, Tujh ko dil mein basaya tha ma ney teeri, Maa key saye mein parwan chadney laga, Waqt key saat khad tera badney laga, Dheerey dheerey to kadyel jawan hogaya, Tuj pey sara jahan meherban ho gaya, Zor bazoo pey toh baat karney laga, Khud hi sajney laga khud sawarney laga, Ek din ek haseena tujhey bhagayee, Ban key dulhan woh terey ghar aagayee, Farz apney sey to door honey laga, Beech nafrat ka khud hi to boney laga, Phir to maa baap ko bhi bhulaney laga, Teer batoon key phir to chalaney laga, Baat bey baat in sey toh ladney laaga, Khayeda ek naya phir padney laga, Yad kar tujhsey maa ney kaha ek din, Ab hamara ghuzara nahi terey bin, sunkey yeh bat toh tesh mein aagaya, Tera ghussa teree akkal ko kha gaya, Josh mein akey toohney yeh maa sey kaha, Mein tha khamoosh sab dekhta hi raha, Aaj kheta hoon picha mera chod do, JO hey rishta mera tum sey woh tod do, Jawo jakey kaheen khaam dhanda karo, Log martey hein tum bhi kaheen ja maro (to be continued).

by **Bhaimiya** » Sat Aug 03, 2002 9:42 pm

Bhet khar aahein bhartey they woh raat bhar, In ki aahon ka tujh pey na huwa asr, Ek din baap tera chaala rooth kar, Kesey bikhri thi phir tere maa toot kar, Phir woh bey bas ajal koh bulatee rahi, Zindagi is ko har roz satatee rahee, Ek din mout ko bhi taras aagaya, Uska rona bhi taqdeer ko bhagaya, Ash aankhon mein they woh rawana hoyee, Mout ka ek hichki bahana huwee, Ek sukoon is key chehrey per chaney laga, Phir toh mayat ko uskee sajaney laaga, Mudadtein hogayee aaj budha hey toh, Jo pada toothee khutya pey khoda hey toh, Terey bachey bhi ab tujsey dartey nahee, Nafratein hein mahabat woh kartey nahi, Dard mein toh pukarey key oh meri maa, Terey dam sey roshan they dono jahan, Waqt chalta rahey waqt rukta nahee, Toot jata hey woh jo key jhukta nahi, Ban key ibrat ka toh ab nishan rah gaaya, Dhondey rzor tera kahan rah gaya, Toh ahkaam rabi bhulata raha, Apney maap baap ko toh satata raha, Kat le to wohee toh ney boya tha jo, Tuj ko kesey miley to ney khoya tha jo, Yad karkey gaya dor roney laga, Kal jo to ney kiya aaj honey laaga, Mout mangey tujhey mout aatee nahi, Maa ki surat nighaon sey jaati nahee, To jo khansey to aulaad dantey tujhey, Toh hey nasoor sukh kon bantey tujhey, Mout aayeygee tujh ko magar waqt per, Ban hi jayegi teree khabar waqt per, Khadr maa baap ki ghar koyee jan ley, apnee janat ko duniya mein phechan ley, aur leta rahey woh badon ki duwa, Uskey dono jahan is ka haami Khuda, Yad rakhna toh sager ki is baak ko, Bhool jana na rahmat ki barsaat ko.

by **Ravi Rajan** » Tue Aug 06, 2002 4:28 am

wah ... kya andaaze bayaan hai ... \\\'sacchayi zindagi ki\\\'... subhanallah ... bahut khoob bhaimiyan

by **Bhaimiya** » Tue Aug 06, 2002 11:36 pm

Shukriya bhai Ravi.

by **Bhirr ustaad** » Thu Aug 08, 2002 6:53 am

Bhai miyaaN bhai waah !! aapki baat dil ko chu rahi hai.
acchi cheez laayeiN hai aap hamari aankein kholeny ke liyeey,Allah izz wa Jal hameiN nek taufeeq ata farmaaye

by **Bhaimiya** » Thu Aug 08, 2002 3:26 pm

Bhirr Ustaad: Shukriya. Apney kisi bhi kaam sey kisi ki aankein khool saktee hein toh bahut khushi ki baat hey.

by **Ghazala** » Sat Aug 10, 2002 4:06 am

Mashallah Bhaimian,
Aapki nazam padhkar ankh se ashk bahe gaye.Kaash sab apne waldaen se thodi si hi muhabbat kar lete!Excellent piece!
Ghazala.

by **Kulcha Hyderabadi** » Sat Aug 10, 2002 12:54 pm

Wah bhaimiya. bahut khoob. Kuch masroofiyat ki bina shehar se bahar tha...apki posting per ek shayr mujhe bhi yaad aagya hai...agar ijazat ho to -----\"Apney purkhon ki nishaani ko sambhaal kar rakhna, Ab ke baarish mein yeh deewar bhi gir jayegi\"

by **Bhaimiya** » Sat Aug 10, 2002 4:49 pm

Ghazala: Shukriya aapki hosala afzayee ka, mohabbat key saat saat thodi si khidmat bhi honee chahiye. Duniya mein har cheez mil sakti hey per maa baap nahi, unko agar ek baar is duniya sey kho diye toh hamesha key liye kho diye aur Jannat paney ka aasan moka bhi gawan diye.

by **Bhaimiya** » Sat Aug 10, 2002 4:51 pm

Kulcha bhai welcome back, mein bhi thoda aapki taraf sey fikrmand tha key aap kahan gayeb hogaye, aapko board per wapis dekh khar dil koh sukoon huwa. Bahut khoob \"Apney purkhon ki nishaani ko sambhaal kar rakhna\".

by **Kya Khene** » Sat Apr 17, 2004 9:06 pm

Bahot khoob BM.

by **dil jaani** » Fri Apr 23, 2004 11:13 pm

bhai miyan, likha to achcha hi hai bhai, magar, aisa lag raha hai jaise, zind rahe tak to ek glass doodh bhi nahien diya unko aur marne ke baad unki khbar pe gai[cow] leja kar bandh diya. unka khiyal to unke zinda rahne per karna re bhai, ab aanso bahane se kiya haasil.

by **munni pasha** » Fri Apr 23, 2004 11:17 pm

ayyo, ujad ho ko jao ji ma, bhai miyan, tum to ek dam rolane koich baith gai ji, itte dino se amma khab mein aa rain the to maien bhot udas thi , ab tum yeh sob bol ko pooraich rula diye.

by **shaikh** » Fri Apr 23, 2004 11:46 pm

bohot achhe bhaimiya.!!!!

hillaa diye aap.!!!

(looks like i am that guy)

by BM » Sat Apr 24, 2004 1:27 pm

dil jaani wrote:bhai miyan, likha to achcha hi hai bhai, magar, aisa lag raha hai jaise, zind rahe tak to ek glass doodh bhi nahien diya unko aur marne ke baad unki khbar pe gai[cow] leja kar bandh diya. unka khiyal to unke zinda rahne per karna re bhai, ab aanso bahane se kiya haasil.

dil jaani: Aapke comments ka shukriya, bhai bahot sare aiese hein jo maa aur baap ki zindagi mei unki khidmat kiye hein aur bahot sare aiese badnaseeb jo maa baap ki khidmat nahi ker paye aur ab peshta rahe hein

by BM » Sat Apr 24, 2004 1:28 pm

munni pasha wrote:ayyo, ujad ho ko jao ji ma, bhai miyan, tum to ek dam rolane koich baith gai ji, itte dino se amma khab mein aa rain the to maien bhot udas thi , ab tum yeh sob bol ko pooraich rula diye.

Are are aapko meri taraf sei rona paRha, bahot bahot maafi chahton lekin kuch sabak bhi mila hoga na :?:

by BM » Sat Apr 24, 2004 1:30 pm

shaikh wrote:bohot achhe bhaimiya.!!!!

hillaa diye aap.!!!

(looks like i am that guy)

Pasandeedgi ka shukriya shaikh.

Rahmat ki Barsaat by Saghar